Sunday, March 08, 2009

Who Cares about IQ!

(this is my essay, that I wrote it with a gigantic passion, please leave your comment, so I can revise or elaborate it. THANKIIESS... :D)
 “Success is 99% perspiration and 1% inspiration”, said Thomas Alva Edison. This quotation shows that Intelligences does not play the most important role to determined people success. Albert Einstein for example, he is suffering from dyslexia--have difficulty to read, but he is being one of the greatest founders in the world. People success is not about their score in math, or even chemistry. But, more to their ability get a long well with others. I’m sure; people’s success depends on their hard work, their Emotional Intelligences and talent.

The most important thing
that determined people success is hard works. Basically those who are full of initiative encompass colossal enthusiasm and bestow limitless effort in the things they do. They have always willed to achieve improvement, even as minimal to the margin as possible. Thus with sufficient hard work, they do achieve that success. Their circle of accomplishments surrounds this fixation called ‘hard work’ and that ‘hard work’ has contained gigantic amounts of work (or joules in physics terms; as to units of work). With going through and overcoming again and again the gigantic amounts of work, they will be adapted to that and in the long run, have no difficulty in surpassing themselves for they are used to the term ‘difficulty’. For those who might be bothered with the fact that intelligences are solemnly just impossible to be surpassed, think again! Hard work does surpass intelligences, especially in terms of effort. Their willingness to improve shoves them to become the spotlight in their surroundings, and achieve success easily. 

Another important thing to determine people success is their emotional intelligences. EQ, or well known as Emotional Intelligence. Emotional Intelligence is not only about the way people control their emotion, know as managing emotion -- the ability to regulate emotion in both ourselves and in others ,but also about relationship management — the ability to inspire, influence, and develop others while managing conflict. Therefore, the emotionally intelligent person can harness emotions, even negative ones, and manage them to achieve intended goals. This is a kind of intrapersonal intelligences. People with this intelligence are easily to get something they want, or persuade other people to trust them. For example, my auntie is a chief manager in a famous hotel in Jakarta. In contrast, she is not really smart a school and university, but she can achieve that success. When I asked her how can she achieve success, she said, “when you can make other people trust you, and you also can maintain your emotion, you can make other people like you, and do whatever you asked for.” That’s why people who have good Emotion intelligences are easily to communicate with other people, and make friends with others. When people have good emotional intelligences, I am sure, success is on their hand. 

Last but not least, Success is about talent and the way people improve and also manage their  talent. God creates us with different kinds of talent and our job is to maintain and improve it well and make the best of it. My father for example ,he has a physical defect—only have one hand, because of an incident. But, now he is being a senior editor in Suara Pembaruan daily news paper, he ever being the vice chief editorial staff, who is a person who responsible the whole news paper everyday, and I am really proud of him. I sure the success that my father achieve, is because he is straight to improve and maintain his talent and never hear what other people talk about. He is inspire me so much, he ever want other people pity with him. He wants other people know his talent and ability to achieve success. He want to be a light in the dark, and being a person who change people mind, who says people with physical defect can not do anything, and always need help from other people. My father is a live witness, and also as a prove, when people want to maintain their ability to the max, there is always a way out to success. 

In brief, Intelligences is not play the most important role to people success. But, people’s success depends on their hard work, their Emotional Intelligences and their ability to improve and maintain their talent to the max. Every body can achieve their own success when they can do all of this way. Success is not only a word for people who have a good intelligence, but for everybody. 



8 comments:

truetaleswhatever said...

eh sumpah ya gue udah pingin cepet2 selesai capek gue bikin revise bikin revise huaaaaah..lo udah sampe draft keberapa?

Ully said...

sama gw jugaaa! males deh ya. ini udah draft ke 2. dan gw berharap ini yang terakhir.tapi, kynya masih ada yg salah deh ya.hha

fahmi anugrah said...

kyaknya essay lw kurang brave deh, gak ada mood yang enak pas dibaca. Intinya kyak ngebaca kertas kosong yang bolong gitu. komposisi informasinya juga biasa aja gak bagus-bagus amat. harusnya isinya bisa lebih ngasih positive side effect bukannya kebalikannya. tapi dari segi power of the word nya sih lumayan lah. assumptio communicationnya juga gak begitu clear, kurang wajar aja jadinya. nadanya juga masih terlalu datar, kadang-kadang naik ato turun setengah ketuk, sekalinya tinggi cuma bisa falset, yaudah deh good luck yuh Bone!

Ully said...

actually Amii, i write a kind of argumentative essay. so, i believe, that this is the best from me! Iya gk Dania? hha, maksa mampus gw?!

Artta Napitupulu said...

Ully i freaked out when i saw this sucha post.
Its like, i do speak english,but i cant make an essay like this,what a poor me.haha.
Anyway,visit my blog please.thanks

truetaleswhatever said...

ully, this blog made you pass the leat level... so proud of you ully and i miss you sooo much
cupc cup muah muah,
daniaming ha!

Ully said...

I miss you berrymuch also Danny! really-really missssss you!

Ully said...

I miss you berrymuch also Danny! really-really missssss you!